english fail

[ibmman]

"Having a standardized semantic data format for the database would, as already mentioned, in the addition of such additional data."

Editing stuff I wrote in the last couple of days. That's a pretty poor sentence right there.

Comments

[cesarano.livejournal.com]

What point were you originally trying to make with that?

[theworryrock.livejournal.com]

haha yeahwut

[suzuka-lee.livejournal.com]

Technically it's not a sentence, it's a fragment!